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Great test, You do plan to make more right?

Though the frames were a bit choppy, it was over all a really great test. Somethings to improve on:

1. Framerate, like I said, the choppyness makes the whole flashes' overall quality go down quite a bit, fix this, and you'll be looking closer to pro.

2. Speed, when the assassin threw his knife, it looked like it was in slow motion, I'm not sure if you intended it this way, but it looked like everything was moving much slower than it should.

3. Filesize, for such a short flash, the size shouldn't be 6.7 megabytes. You might want to start compressing your audio some more.

Tarantulabean responds:

Right, I'll up the frame rate next time.

Also, I have been having some trouble working with audio, this is the first time working with it in an animation. I also don't really know how to make the audio stop at certain points, it just keeps going, which is why the music still plays after the video is over.

Maybe you could save me some time and PM some tips on how to edit audio and compress it etc. Becuase I don't want it to be bigger than it needs to be.

funny but

Needs an end, it just keeps looping...

oafuse responds:

I would have put an end if I could have found the file, so I had a slight problem. I also would have put a loader on.

Only one major problem

It loops, you are probably away of this but in case your not, please fix that.

CoadyBrosProductions responds:

what's wrong with a loop?

Seems incomplete

its a great story, i would prefer it to be a video than a slide show but its good anyway, the ending seems very incomplete though, anyway i cant wait to see the rest.

Celx-Requin responds:

Hello,

It was meant to be a comic book, so I tried to keep to the spirit of my source material anyhow I am aware it's pretty short.

However unlike something like shark, these chapters will be released a lot quicker,
so everything will come together soon.

Thanks for the review!
Sincerely,
- Celx

Not bad

It definably could have been better, the ending was a bit abrupt, and the animation was nothing special, as said in your description, time would have given you a better result.

StillBeatingPictures responds:

Yeah, I wasnt too happy with the cycles I did in this. It's got its good bits though.

Thanks for reading the comments and for the review.

well

I saw the Trailer Yesterday, and the first half may have well been a trailer, it was OK but i really expected more, much more. like a full storyline how the trojans came to be and stuff like that, plus the overall quality definatly dropped for this. sorry not really that good.

ArkAngelNate responds:

It was the file size. Newgrounds doesn't allow me to upload anything very large. I was having huge difficulty getting the filsize down. However, I'm going to try and reupload this later into something better.

Not Flash but..

...better than some of the flash videos i have seen on this site, and a very good stop motion, i give you props just for having the patience to do it lol. anyway nice job.

ReCessA805 responds:

thanx =]... ya stopmotion can be timeconsuming

Popular Demand?

Dude the first seabat sucked, for this all you did was change the music, and i think you sped up the loop. this is not ANY better. Nice try though? maybe?

Chitch responds:

Yeah, I admit. It's not any better. When you compare Muse and Black, Black comes out ontop. I could make another with a different Black song, if you'd like?

Wow... no

Knew it was a loop within the first 3 seconds, all i had to do was right click and stop the loop, instantly everything stopped exept for the music. nice try but no.

Chitch responds:

Still better than your shit, you cunt

...Improvment..

Seriously, this is more of a test flash. The animation is great for a first time. Thing for improovment, quiet your beggining sound, make a better story, it seemed way more epic then in the begginging then the iguana, the music, and the joke at the end werent that great, kinda ruined the mood. Im sure you can create something better with some creativity.

AlonZA responds:

Well, its my first flash(got flash 5 days ago), and i wanted to exprience some new tools on flash, and make a random inside joke.

Its just random, my next one i'll think of a bigger script.

Anyway, thanks, next movie i'll surely make longer, with better sound adjust.

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