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[Jingles]

Only one major problem

It loops, you are probably away of this but in case your not, please fix that.

CoadyBrosProductions responds:

what's wrong with a loop?

[CoolJaw: O.S. I-V]

Seems incomplete

its a great story, i would prefer it to be a video than a slide show but its good anyway, the ending seems very incomplete though, anyway i cant wait to see the rest.

Celx-Requin responds:

Hello,

It was meant to be a comic book, so I tried to keep to the spirit of my source material anyhow I am aware it's pretty short.

However unlike something like shark, these chapters will be released a lot quicker,
so everything will come together soon.

Thanks for the review!
Sincerely,
- Celx

[Tribute to Trenchies]

Not bad

It definably could have been better, the ending was a bit abrupt, and the animation was nothing special, as said in your description, time would have given you a better result.

StillBeatingPictures responds:

Yeah, I wasnt too happy with the cycles I did in this. It's got its good bits though.

Thanks for reading the comments and for the review.

[Freckle Sauce]

...Improvment..

Seriously, this is more of a test flash. The animation is great for a first time. Thing for improovment, quiet your beggining sound, make a better story, it seemed way more epic then in the begginging then the iguana, the music, and the joke at the end werent that great, kinda ruined the mood. Im sure you can create something better with some creativity.

AlonZA responds:

Well, its my first flash(got flash 5 days ago), and i wanted to exprience some new tools on flash, and make a random inside joke.

Its just random, my next one i'll think of a bigger script.

Anyway, thanks, next movie i'll surely make longer, with better sound adjust.